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Monday, September 21, 2020

Camp presentation 2020

 

3 comments:

  1. I liked all of the funny pictures at the end especially the one one slide 14. I thimk you could have improved the amount of writing it though

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  2. I liked the way you added a lot of helpful photos that indicated what you were talking about. you reminded me of when mrs dyer was making that delicious fried bread. you could have had more writing about the pictures though. thanks I enjoyed your post also. sorry if this doesn't make sense.

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  3. Kia Ora Kordal!
    I really liked how you added so many pictures and it reminds me of my camp last year which was really fun!
    I think my only feedback would be to change the size of the slide so it fits on the page but other than that this looks really great!

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